Graduate School Statement Template Page 11
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Don't mention potentially controversial subjects (for example, controversial religious or
political issues).
Do some research, if needed
If a school wants to know why you're applying to it rather than another school, do some
research to find out what sets your choice apart from other universities or programs. If the
school setting would provide an important geographical or cultural change for you, this
might be a factor to mention.
Write well and correctly
Be meticulous. Type and proofread your essay very carefully. Many admissions officers
say that good written skills and command of correct use of language are important to
them as they read these statements. Express yourself clearly and concisely. Adhere to
stated word limits.
Avoid clichés
A medical school applicant who writes that he is good at science and wants to help other
people is not exactly expressing an original thought. Stay away from often-repeated or
tired statements.
Some examples of successful statements
Statement #1
My interest in science dates back to my years in high school, where I excelled in physics,
chemistry, and math. When I was a senior, I took a first-year calculus course at a local college
(such an advanced-level class was not available in high school) and earned an A. It seemed only
logical that I pursue a career in electrical engineering.
When I began my undergraduate career, I had the opportunity to be exposed to the full range of
engineering courses, all of which tended to reinforce and solidify my intense interest in
engineering. I've also had the opportunity to study a number of subjects in the humanities and
they have been both enjoyable and enlightening, providing me with a new and different
perspective on the world in which we live.
In the realm of engineering, I have developed a special interest in the field of laser technology
and have even been taking a graduate course in quantum electronics. Among the 25 or so
students in the course, I am the sole undergraduate ate. Another particular interest of mine is
electromagnetics, and last summer, when I was a technical assistant at a world-famous local lab,
I learned about its many practical applications, especially in relation to microstrip and antenna
design. Management at this lab was sufficiently impressed with my work to ask that I return
when I graduate. Of course, my plans following completion of my current studies are to move
directly into graduate work toward my master's in science. After I earn my master's degree, I
intend to start work on my Ph.D. in electrical engineering. Later I would like to work in the area
of research and development for private industry. It is in R & D that I believe I can make the
greatest contribution, utilizing my theoretical background and creativity as a scientist.
The Writing Center: Writing a Grad School Personal Statement
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